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Darkest Darkness by ~B1u3dr4g0n:iconB1u3dr4g0n:



As the light breaks o’er my bed,
Splintered through the branches of a tree,
It fails to light my heart, my mind, my soul.

My heart heavy with battles lost and won,
of loved ones come and gone.
My mind rife with questions,
riddled by space and time.
My soul sad with uncertain dreams,
Lost hopes and desires,
And all fear the future.

Oh! The future that like a broken mirror doth lay before me.
A mirror of uncertain truths in which,
I fail to see myself.
The future, the dune of my life
ever changing in the wind,
the sands of time.

As the light fades from my sight,
I try to gasp it,
I call to it,
but to no avail.

In desperation I scream
“God help me!...”

And from with in my soul,
a voice answers
“I am here…”

I feel his grasp take hold of my life.
A calm comes to my heart,
my soul,
my mind.
“He is with me…” I feel.
A light in my darkest darkness,
Though my questions go unanswered,
My mind is at ease,
my soul can rest and my heart grows lighter,
As darkness takes my body,
I embrace a sweet sleep.
©2005-2009 ~B1u3dr4g0n
:iconb1u3dr4g0n:

Author's Comments

I was lost in deep though, so i decided to write down how i felt, it soon turned into a poem. I was writing this poem on impulse, and wrote down the first thing that came to mind and well...




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Plse tell me what you think of it...

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:iconnitegoddess:
Love it, how i feel most of time... brilliant as an impulse piece

Love ya
D
xxxxxxx

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Music is love, love is music, music is my life and I love my life.
Death is more universal than life; everyone dies but not everyone lives.
:iconb1u3dr4g0n:
Thanx, and thnx for adding it to your fav's. :)
:icondrmanticore:
Wow, I finally got round to reading things. You're an awesome poet. I don't usually like poetry :D
:iconb1u3dr4g0n:
Thnx again for adding my poems to uor fav.s :).
:iconspikedforlife:
Awsome poem there, real deep, and a lot of expression....love it

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Every day is a new painting, painted by God
:jedi:
:icon0-crystalflame-0:
Dude... dam, what can I say... I didn't think you had IT in you.... You're dam good man...


Respect!!!!!(Not given to easily!!!)

I kinda don't know what to say..... I could realy feel this poem...

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